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Hello I am society
And let me tell you a little of how life's going to be
I will change you
Reshape you
And completely rearrange you
I'll tell you what you can & can't do
I'll ridicule your every move
And you can chose not to listen
But I guarantee
I will take away everything you are
And destroy everything you ever wanted to be
Sometimes I feel as though society doesn't give enough credit towards certain people (artists, writers, musicians, etc.). I also feel it kind of puts people into one little slot of being good at everything instead embracing a few things people are truly amazing at. It also judges a lot on people's appearances. And so, this poem came about =D

Thanks to all faves!! :hug:
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WinxMewGirl Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great poem! I think it's a pretty accurate reflection of what society can be like sometimes.
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UpscalexFuneral Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014   General Artist
Sorry this is so late; thank you!! :hug:
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Pauper-Circumstance Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
Society can truly be sickening sometimes. Wonderful job expressing that in this poem. :clap:
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UpscalexFuneral Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013   General Artist
Thank you so much! =D :bow:
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Pauper-Circumstance Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013
Haha! Yes, take a bow! You deserve it. :)
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UpscalexFuneral Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013   General Artist
=*D
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ravingroshie Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
great poem :)
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UpscalexFuneral Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2013   General Artist
Thanks! =D
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Darken-Drekon Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
it's so true it's kinda depressing but I like it.
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Silencedbook9 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Student Writer
I agree. Society is evil!!!! The individual counts!!!!!!
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UpscalexFuneral Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   General Artist
In some aspects, yes >.> But I wouldn't completely write it off haha
The individual does count, a lot
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UpscalexFuneral Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   General Artist
The poem or the reality? and Thank you! =D
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Darken-Drekon Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
the answer to you question is: yes :)
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